jc-photography 0 Posted November 28, 2005 Thanks for looking, critique/feedback is greatly appreciated. Jake. Link to comment
jeff.grant 0 Posted November 28, 2005 Jake, IMHO this shot would be improved by a crop to the left and right sides. It tidies up the unresolved rocks on the right and brings the log into the corner. The log points to the rock which points to the bright cloud etc. The steely sea and rocks work well together. My only regret is those dark clouds in the top of the frame which disturb the view. Link to comment
jc-photography 0 Posted November 29, 2005 Thanks Jeff. I've got to agree with you too mate, less is definitely more. Maybe even leaning toward a square crop and taking a little bit more from each side . Thanks again for taking the time to look and offering some valuable insight. Cheers, Jake. Link to comment
julio_segura_carmona1 4 Posted November 29, 2005 Excelente trabajo,,luz, y bella composicion,, saludos Jake,,,6/6.http://www.hectorbrandan.com/images/julio-carmona.gif Link to comment
distantvoice 0 Posted August 3, 2006 I do not agree fully with Jeff. The dark clouds work as a curtain here, they provide a perfect frame for this wise composition and for me they do not constitute any disturbance really. I would even amplify the vignetting which is visible here, but that would create a little bit surreal photo, so maybe it is better to leave it as it is - a perfect aesthetic photograph with original idea behind it. Congratulations. Link to comment
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