church door

critique and ratings welcome

I wish you had gone in closer. I get the point, but the image is just not powerful enough. I think b/w might also add...

I can't say whether B&W would be an improvement, but I feel strongly that getting in closer certainly would. There's a little too much floor in the foreground and the posters on the wall are blown out. By getting in closer and maybe changing your perspective a little, those issues might have been corrected. Also, there's nothing evident to correspond with your caption "church door", but it looks like the posters above the sleeping person might bear some religious significance and could tie it all together. Good luck and keep shooting! James