I'm the luckiest guy in the world

I shot this picture of my wife I we were waiting for my brother to

get dressed for his wedding. Ain't I the luckiest man alive with this

for my wife, sure feels that way.

Maybe crop it like this.

I like the cropping the way it is...gives more of a feeling like she's waiting for something but we just don't know what...with the other cropping it just looks like she's thinking about something...

Keep it the way it is. Definately much better than the new crop. It looks like she's impatiently watching something, rather than staring into space thinking about something else.

The initial cropping is much better. It provokes thought by the viewer. The second cropping makes it look like everybody elses pictures. Nice. I like it.

Good photo and good expression. I like the contrast and the off center composition of the original. Although she looks a little angry

 

Well done

Beautiful portrait, Bas. Summicron 50 signature all over and the tonality is perfect. What are you processing the HP5+ with?

thanks Jorge, but this was captured on Portra VC color film and then converted in PS. That works very very though as you can see, the print is just fantastic. Cheers