At a window

I shall be glad to kind words and constructive criticism

Technically well done. The only I think it could be better is the expression of the model. Her expression doen't look natural.

excellent lighting ......good

Sadest look I've ever seen on a model. If she was having a good time she should have told her face!

I don't know Something about her mood grabs me. I personally like it allot. Why? She is not directed to the lens. She is not putting on the normal sultry attitude. She is not trying to be anything. She has a very good natural figure and is presented as a normal young woman. She is not over done either in styling and or make up. I like it and I like her as a model. Well done Randall

Very pretty model but something about the expression looks less than natural. I like the setting and the light, great detail on the other side of the window. I would love to see this photograph again with the model laughing.

maybe a reflector to open up the shadows?