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Comments welcomed. Thanks

I love the composition of the lower part of the photo but the upper part is blown out and distracts. I would like to suggest cropping the top to make the photo stronger and have attached an example. Regards.

I think you included too much in this picture. I would suggest cropping it. It is indeed unfortunate that the top has become washed out, though this may be due to the scanning process.

 

Edit: it seems my quick crop suggestion has also remove the warm glow the original has. That wasn't my intention.

image is too large.. Haziness,so use gradation filter

 

 

 

good luk

 

I sure appreciate the comments. I am trying to take my love of photography to a new level and all the help I get is going to get me there. Thanks again.