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© Copyright 2005 peterb

Honey in the Strip District, Pittsburgh


peter_berger

ISO 200 equivalent, f5.6

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© Copyright 2005 peterb

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I've never submitted a photo for critique before, so I figured I'd try this out and see what sort

of comments I get. I'm most interested in constructive criticism. What did I do wrong or

right with this one?

 

-peter

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Nice use of light. I think fewer bottles of honey might help you out some here. Also, a little bounce on the right side might also help. Use a gold bounce and you wiill keep the warm tones.
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I see too many distractions. In the top left corner at the top of the bottles I see someones shoulder. On the left part of the photo there is a bright white unidentifiable figure. The table corner takes away from the photo. I don't like the crop at all. Looks as though it could have been an attractive photo however the distractions and bad crop are hard to over come. I hope you find this critique more satisfying than the one you left about the photo of my daughter.

 

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