Jump to content

Another one from my NY trip, please critique


tirta s

Recommended Posts

The sharp focus and the compostioin make the subject clear to me, at least

physically, but I find myself puzzled at what I am supposed to see here, or

perhaps what you saw that made you want to work on it- perhaps this is why

other posters are puzzled by the subject matter? In anycase, you show good

technique here, and a clear desire and ability to work with intentional

composition. But the image doesn't grab me in the way I imagine it must have

grabbed you to make it. Perhaps you are ready to apply your tools and

technique to a subject or issue that is important to you, and may resonate with

others? Keep shooting, and show us more.

Link to comment
Share on other sites

Create an account or sign in to comment

You need to be a member in order to leave a comment

Create an account

Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!

Register a new account

Sign in

Already have an account? Sign in here.

Sign In Now
×
×
  • Create New...