picturesque Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>OK, here it is--an image with lots of potential for creative Photoshopping. It was taken by Raymond Thompson. Below are his comments.</p> <p><em>"I liked this image, others did not, others did. There is no accounting for personal taste. This image has not been modified and there are a few undesireable elements that I would eliminate (red cord, light blocks in back left). I would also probably warm the image up slightly using NIK Skylight filter. But the point of this was to present an unmodified image so nothing has been done but to crop to 700 pixels wide and JPG compression."</em><br> <em></em><br> You may post one reworked image, so make it your best effort. Any explanations about why and how you did what you did are encouraged and appreciated. Any critique is also welcome. Please remember to make your image 700 pixels wide and post a caption.</p> <p>For those of you wondering what this thread is about, this is part two of an exercise called Photo of the Week, in which an image is chosen from submissions to be critiqued, or, in this case, 'photoshopped' by others. You may find the thread with image submissions by looking for the most recent one with a similar title.<p> <p>Have fun!</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stephaniaw Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>My personal take on it: Convert to B&W, ultra slight chocolate-y tone, curves & levels to boost contrast and make it "pop" a bit more. My preference for the B&W stems from there not really being any significant color in the photo to begin with. It feels kind of dull in color. I feel that it is more dramatic as a B&W.</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theresa_skutt Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>I had trouble focusing my eyes on the bride. The bored bridesmaids & flower girl, elbow coming out of the brides's arm ( I edited it, but quickly), and all the other things made me want to put a spotlight on her, since she is (I'm guessing) the focus.</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
julie_g. Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>Here's an attempt, keping the color. I blurred out the girls some, and took out some distracting lights in the background. Changed the colors a bit to warm it up.</p> <p><img src="http://www.juliegossephotography.com/photos/673361699_Xohsy-L.jpg" alt="" /></p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuart_meyer Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>Here's my take on that image.<br> <img src="http://www.stuartmeyerphotography.com/photodotnet/Bride.jpg" alt="" /></p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rayt Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>Nice adjustments all. A wide range of opinions. Interesting from Mr. Meyer with the missing head, hmmm. The B&W from Ms. Skutt is guite good along with the treatment from Ms. Whitfield.</p> <p>Now a little background on the image. There was another photographer that I was working with who was arranging the image and taking the image from the front, about 90 degrees to left. We team up on weddings and she was running the show at this point in the proceedings. I was off to the side and liked the lighting. I just quickly snapped the image and moved on. I made no attempt to get anyone, including the bored bridesmaids to do anything. This was not a setup image from my vantage point.</p> <p>So here is what I would do with the image. I used the same low resolution image that y'all had to deal with. I cloned out the arm, removed the cord, removed the bright spots, darkened the edges, warmed up the image, and then vignetted the image.</p> <p>So thank you all for the ideas. I look forward to some more interesting options from all you creative folks.</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
francie_baltazar Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>so my idea was to go with something completely different... this would not be something that would go into an ablum necessarly - I was thinking portriat like or canvas. I wish the bride was not full on profile and I wish the girls did not look so bored... because I am not keen on the photos I like to go more extreme with the look.... so with that I would make it into something arty. I would have worked on her face a bit more but this is the quick look so you get the idea...</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike_stemberg Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 Looking at the image from top left the first thing I 'noticed' was the doorway out of kilter..and that led me onwards to the other things...like building things around the edges etc. I suppose I could have cropped off that offending corner but that would have meant losing that lovely 'bored look girl' who is sitting at the end. I also left in the half-hidden brides-maid, who I'm sure would have only been offended for being simply 'taken out'. It was fun 'playin'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KenPapai Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>I would bring some detail out of the shadows then a straight conversion to B&W, with more emphasis on the RED channel:</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mike_stemberg Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 My image got separated from my 06:08 comment. Here it is now.<div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tina___cliff_t Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>We both took a Stab at this. I personally don't like the people in the background at all. The bored faces seem to distracting so I cropped and blurred the image. </p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tina___cliff_t Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>Cliff wanted to bring the attention to the flowers. </p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david_schilling___chicago_ Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>This image was certainly a challenge. I'd rather hoped that Tina's bridal portrait might have been selected for this exercise, perhaps she'll brave a separate post with her image (hint, hint). The bride's hip and left arm placement is troublesome for this pose, I'm not sure how it looked to the lead photographer from the other angle but I'm always trying to place the weight on the back hip with the upper torso leaning slightly towards the camera. Pretty bride.</p> <p>In my PS attempt I've tried to minimize the distracting elements, did a softening action along with adding fill and a slight color desaturation. Sloppy border was just for fun.</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schroeder Posted October 7, 2009 Share Posted October 7, 2009 <p>I'm not very good with photo manipulation, but the three lovely bridemaides had to go.So my idea is something like this. Sorry for crappy PS skills :-)<br><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pete_s. Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>I think the lighting in the image is great but the use of a wide angle and subsequent foreshortening of the bride and the bridesmaids are unfortunate. I corrected the perspective and removed the extra people, flowers and other stuff that where mostly clutter anyway. I kept the bridesmaids though.</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hal_b Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>Who wants to remember the moment during their day when the bridesmaids were bored out of their minds and the Bride looked suicidal? Do the bride a favor and scrap shots like this, rather than posting them on the internet to be mangled.</p> <p>If you want to host a PS contest, start with a GOOD stock image and let people attempt to make it look GREAT. Don't start with something poorly executed and try to make it only mediocre.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bjcarlton Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>Good heavens, why do people want to get rid of the bored bridesmaids and otherwise glamorize the bride? The whole thing that makes this image interesting is that it steps away from the wedding fantasy photographers are paid to create, and documents what's going on just to the sides of the fantasy and what goes into creating the fantasy. Now, if your goal were to sell an image to the bride, things would be different. I imagine you'd be standing where the off-camera photographer was standing, you would have carefully left out the actual context of where the bride was -- and you would have very little post processing to do.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hal_b Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>I believe that all the things which are necessary to be done to "correct" this image were probably not necessary in the image from the main camera. You've basically taken a photo that was never meant to be taken. It's a "behind the scenes", and not much sense in post production. You might as well leave it how it is and move on. Is the Bride going to order a print of this pose, looking like Bridezilla?</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manuel barrera houston, Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>Maybe they want to test some people ability with photoshop skills and some people lack such skills so they attack the selection of a photo that was posted, how putting smiles on the faces;-) I was not going to spend time on this as I have more then enough to do at the moment, but I think when I get home tonight I will work on the image-</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wedding-photography-denver Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>l did some sharpening, burning and a little contrast etc..</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rodney_carpenter Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>Photoshop Challenge !</p><div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hal_b Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>A person should recall in times when he is retouching one of his own photos that the end result is only as good as the subject, preparation, and lighting. This is regardless of the modifications effected in post production.</p> <p>Mr. Barrera: I am very satisfied with the results posted by others already. I especially liked the post by Pete S. I know for a fact that I cannot produce a result to improve on what others have already shown. Mr. Carpenter's post is very interesting, and I think the use of selective color and blur might very well be the best solution for this photo. For these reasons I am not interested in attempting the challenge myself.</p> <p>Lastly, I would like to point out that others have had the opportunity to say why they appreciate this photo, as a good candid, a juxtaposition, or an interesting use of lighting or whatever. That's fine. I simply disagree. I believe my negative opinion should be just as welcome in this or any forum as the positive ones.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manuel barrera houston, Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>Mr. Bradbury, I would not have posted that image either, but when I first saw it, I saw that it was the one that needed the most work. I was such in a hurry to finish my post I did not proof read and edit the post. I will at least attempt to add a smile to her face.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
picturesque Posted October 8, 2009 Author Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>Hal--a negative opinion is fine, as long as you do not attack anyone in the process. A negative opinion is welcome as long as it is stated in a civil manner.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hal_b Posted October 8, 2009 Share Posted October 8, 2009 <p>Rodney: I love your treatment here. Truly. I especially love your caption.</p> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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