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<p>Thanks for your comments and time. Matt and Nathan, I especially found your thoughts helpful. If you would, plea se look at our new site. Its not yet complete, obviously and there is still much weeding out that needs to be done, b ut perhaps you can see the direction its goin in. I've never worked with HTML or built a website before so it is def sl ow going. Bear in mind that we are not just offering straight photos, as in the case of wedding photography, so mo re creative license was taken in terms of lighting and effects. Again, thanks for both your thoughts and time. :) Oh, and the facebook thing was really kind of making me sick, so no loss there. < /p> < p > a.</p>

<p> <a href="http://www.CNCcreativePix.com">http://www.CNCcreativePix.com</a></p>

 

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<p>I think that it looks like it's on the right track. The background is easy on the eyes, but the darker blue text is hard to read. I'd go for something with more contrast, maybe more of that light blue, or a light gray? Definitely some filling in to do in the ampty spaces, and some minor formatting, but overall I'd say that it looks a lot better. Also, I think that you could do something a little more creative with the CNC name, maybe C 'n C with it written differently. Just seems like you could do sometihngn with that name to make it more interesting and obvious about the meaning of the C's.</p>
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<p>I dunno... I'd have to say you will have a hard time attracting anyone. It does look better, but still doesn't really do anything. You have to go to a seperate site to make a purchase. The comments section seems clickable but just shows me the same image/same size in a new window (could be one of the 'works in progress' you mentioned). I'd look into a provider that can incorporate sales into your site and allow you to customize it so that it is cleaner. The cnccreativepix site looks good, but then you have to go to imagekind which is cluttered. Not trying to be a buzz-kill, just trying to be helpful. There are a lot of good sites that don't cost a lot which will give you a much more professional look and feel.</p>
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<p>Thank you all for your comments as they were very helpful. This will probably not be my last website so I will take your last comments under advisement for future reference, Nathan. If anyone cares to look, the finished product is linked below. Thank you all again.<br>

<br />a.<br /><a rel="nofollow" href="http://www.cnccreativepix.com/" target="_blank">http://www.CnCcreativePix.com</a></p>

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