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[saeed_al_hashim]

<p >Hi dears</p>

<p >Its first time I post on of my photography in

photo.net</p>

<p >Give me your opinion</p>

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<p >Saeed AL-Hashim</p>

<p><img src="http://up1.m5zn.com

/9bjndthcm6y53q1w0kvpz47xgs82rf/2009/2/11/09/w7ie0lt04.jpg" alt="" width="3

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[Charles_Webster]

<p>Welcome to PN. I'd suggest posting on the Critique Forum to get more reactions.</p>

<p><Chas></p>

[saeed_al_hashim]

<p>dear Charles,</p>

<p>thanks :)</p>

<p>i canot add suggest in the critiqui >>> its showing block from my contry Internent</p>

[mark_hartman]

<p>Hi saeed, I like the expression and the brown tone of this shot, but I'm not crazy about the background. It looks like you might have cloned sections of this repeatedly to remove distractions, but to me it looks rather artificial. (Especially left of his eyes.) Maybe you can try to smooth it out a bit with some blur? From the angle you shot it, it also seems like the background should be less focused at the top than it actually appears. </p>

<p>If not, I guess I just couldn't tell what it was he is sitting on and was distracted by that!</p>

 

[twmeyer]

<p>vertigo. It makes me dizzy... t</p>

[sweet jesus]

<p>Believe it needs bit more contrast as well as the above comments. Where was this taken?</p>