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Hi James , too much DOF and as pointed out the side light does not help.

I would use a larger aperture and perhaps a Zeiss Softar.

The model is beautiful. If you dont mind cleaning your lens try a little vaseline, a very small amount in circular wipe.

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James...... Sarah looks just beautiful in both picture but I personally prefer the first one. She looks exactly how you see her in her and your daily life. Light and lighting play a very important part in pictorial documentation depending what exactly you want to depict or enhance. The classical example is forensic photography where often grazing light is used to bring out minute texture in exaggerated form. A friend of mine was courting a young girl for 21 months. One Saturday night he took her out for a special meal and had decided to propose her for marriage. She had dressed beautifully and looked stunning. They sat at the dinning table having drinks and waiting to order their meal. After some time the waiter came and lit the candle on their table. His words to me " I was shocked what I saw". The light from the bottom of her face showed her facial wrinkles and some small scars which was the result of auto accident when she was still at school. With help of daily cosmetics and in ordinary light of the day, he obviously could not see what he saw at the restaurant table with her face lit from the bottom. What happened afterwards is not relevant but the reason I am telling this story is to point out light can sometimes show and exaggerate under un-natural lighting conditions. PLEASE do not start a debate on the story but stick to light for photography. Thank you.
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Scary, Richard. It's a head shot, the knees poking up at the front edge of the picture plane do nothing for the image. The enviroment is not discribed well enough to be worth including. Cropped vertically it looks like a bad commercial shot so crop it hortz and a little looser. Would look ok 4x5 in a nice little free standing frame sitting atop the baby grand sort-of-thing. Maybe a little less contrasty than this.<p>

 

<img src="http://members.shaw.ca/jamie_jenkins/jameshead.jpg">

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