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Critique (no leica, alas...)


AntonioC

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Here is a <a href="http://www.photo.net/photo/589281">picture</a> I'm quite proud of (printed two days ago). It seems anyway I'm the only one among my circle of critics (i.e. friends)!

How do you (leicaphiles) like it? Just out of curiosity in a lazy friday afternoon...

 

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ps: even I'm no leica-equipped yet, but I usually enjoy the level of this forum, so here we go.

 

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Ciao

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i dislike the photo,not because its not shot on a Leica but,the whole

concept.Its all distorted,badly composed.Sure it looks like what is

being published these days.Ask yourself,is this how You would choose

to be remembered!i think not.Forget funny angles and weird lenses.

Show us somebody we would like to meet...not ET's aunt!

The light is great.Show more of the person,i no longer do "heads-on-a

stick portraits".I do not want other photographers to take photos like

me,or any one else,but their own viewpoint.i have taught photography

and equipment or lack there of is NEVER the problem.Its being

articulate with the medium.Look at John Loenggards photo of his

daughter against a door.Similar light to yours.The difference is he

shows his love,you appear ready to trampel this insect....

Anyway there must be something in this photo to get me worked up.

Hey! most folks hate my photos too....

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This picture is terrible. Piss poor tonal range. Nothing interesting

at all about this image. Now if you had said please critique this

image I took with a M6TTL and 28.2 Summicron I would have said great

shot! Wonderfull tonal range! Nice to see an unconventional portrait.

Keep up the good work.

 

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Regards Steve

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Hmmm, lemme put it this way. Camera is okay, film is great, lens is,

well, this is what it's all about here. I don't know the chick, but if

I did, and was looking up really close to her as usual, finding that

this is a true picture of a special character of hers, then I'd say

the 24mm is good too. But since I don't know her, I'm afraid the 24mm

brings me up tooooo close. IMUO.

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If you want flattering portraits every time, you can get them at K-

Mart, if their bankruptcy doesn't close the stores. Photography is

about a whole lot more than "flattering." I make no attempt

to "flatter" the subjects in my portraits, and it hasn't stopped me

at all.

 

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I think this is an interesting shot that challenges a bit, you have

to think about it. That's a positive. It looks like a CD cover,

maybe it could be.

 

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The problem with asking for criticism is that you get too many

responses that aren't about your photograph, but about what

someone's taste, however bad, may be, rather than any kind of

helpful comments. I'm sure you know that this isn't flattering to

the subject, but it doesn't appear that has sunk in with some of

the "critics."

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Great photograph, Antonio, in my opinion. Any camera can merely take

a photo. What you succeeded in here is to create a mood to go along

with the lady's portrait. You have blended the science of

photography's objectivity (accurate focus and exposure, etc.) with

fine art's subjectivity concerning a means to create mood, emotion,

humor and so forth.

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Interesting photograph! It grabs viewer attention. Hey, almost

everyone either really likes it or hates it: a sign of a good photo.

I don't think anyone said boring,which it definitely isn't. I

reviewed your entire photonet exhibit[except color] and also liked

your metro work. I think your metro work, which I like, would improve

with a rangefinder camera. Keep shooting!

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Antonio, I'm sorry to tell you that I share some of the opinions here

that your picture is interesting but not a good example of portrait

taking. My personal principle in portrait taking is that it must be

beautiful to look at, and it must flatter the subject, unless it's

done for humourous reasons. Look at Mike Dixon's portrait photos and

you'll see what I mean. You can see one of Mike's beautiful

portraits here: <a href="http://greenspun.com/bboard/q-and-a-fetch-

msg.tcl?msg_id=0089Sg">http://greenspun.com/bboard/q-and-a-fetch-

msg.tcl?msg_id=0089Sg</a>. Then again, if you and the subject like

the picture, it really doesn't matter what others think, does it?!

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Thank you very much to all the people here who took their time to

critique this photo. I agree, I consider a success having both

strongly negative respones and positive ones, IMHO better than

something which leaves you so-so, neither warm nor cold. Anyway, I

should point out that this photo wasn't intended to show Silvia as a

beauty (which she really is) but as one of the most curious and never-

ever-relaxed people I've come to know and appreciate. It was a joy to

realize these shots, anyway.

OK, thanks again to all of you, I was very pleased to read your

comments!

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Sorry Antonio, but bug eyes with bulbous nose is crude overstatement

and far too easy in my opinion. The lighting is also stating the

obvious - "see the light is on this side and the darkness is on that

side"

 

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Now if you can capture character in what at first seems ordinary (and

maybe you can), perhaps then you can break the rules. I'm all for

being adventurous but this one belongs back in the box.

 

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Nothing personal Antonio - one man's opinion.

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Besides, great photographers are always sensitive to their subjects,

giving them beauty and dignity instead of revealing their worst or

distorting who they are. Dorothy Lang, Lewis Hine, E. J. Bellocq and

Eugene Smith (particularly, his photos of mecury-poison victims in

Minamata) are examples of such great photographers whose senstivity

to their under-privileged photo subjects rendered them beautiful and

dignified. Of course there are many photographers who just want to

get the "great picture" without sensitivity or consideration to the

subjects--they're call paparazzi!

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