david_h._hartman Posted April 16, 2006 Share Posted April 16, 2006 Steve,<br> <br> I think this cropping improves the photo though its now a bulls eye composition. Id like more of the background for a senses of the place. I lightened this image some with curves. It looks good on my monitor anyway. I cheated, I did selective sharpening of the eyes, mouth and clothing. <br> <br> What I think Id have done here is take a vertical shot to include more of the lady and her cloths. A slightly lower angle would raise her in the frame, not too much or you get the prominent nostril syndrome. If the distance didnt change thered be a bit more width to the image as I cropped side to side. Holding the camera so the back is vertical would avoid convergence in the background architecture (not that I see any now). Then I'd crop the top and bottom as necessary.<br> <br> I did a very light blurring of the background. I used three layers, full image at the bottom, blurred background with the lady erased in the middle and some sharpened facial features and clothing on top. This gives more prominence to the subject. The bulls eye composition bothers me but cropping tighter would loose the sense of place. This is about what I can do. Its much better to get it right in the camera. <br> <br> I would still like a little more blurring of the background. Probably a 35mm f/1.4 would give me what Id want. I still dont see bad bokeh here. I think Im seeing a little diffraction spoking in the center of the string of lights that wouldnt be there if the lens were wide open. Im not sure its such a bad feature.<br> <br> The lens looks fine to me, Id just like another f/stop.<br> <br> Best,<br> <br> Dave Hartman.<br> <br> ---<br> <br> Jeroen, <br> <br> Im so pleased that you like my bokeh test.<br> <br> Thank You!<div></div> Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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