Willet Portrait

Discussion in 'Seeking Critique' started by dcstep, May 1, 2019.

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  2. The only reservation I have is that the "buhd" seems to be falling over forward, off-balance.
    Here it is rotated a bit:
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  3. JDMvW just posted my answer, yes the bird or the image looks to be leaning forward. Like the clarity, detail and natural colours.
     
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  4. willet or wont it, eh? :)

    Sorry, couldn’t resist.

    I completely agree with Ken’s assessment. Apart from the club foot that is
     
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  5. Nicely done. I like the foam being frozen by the shutter speed. I do wish that the narrow dof was centred on the birds head rather than the foam. A small nit-pic and not easy with a moving target.
     
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  6. Tony Parsons

    Tony Parsons Norfolk and Good

    To me, the original seems more 'natural', if I can put it like that - the bird is a) moving forward, and b) bracing itself against the rushing waters through which it is making progress. Having said that, I would have liked a little more space in front of the bird, to give it an area to move in to.
     
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