Hi guys, I am new on here, and find that I frequent this site for advice but have yet to ask my own questions. I love absorbing all the information but I am also looking to interact more. I have recently designed my website and not sure about the "about me" section, it is very me but also not sure if it's too much "me" and maybe I need to tone it down. It goes like this: " Hi! I'm Kim "aka" Berlynn. A high energy, bubbly, seriously creative minded individual who cannot quite be labeled into a neat little box. I love monster energy cans, have a lust for travel, and even a passion for fashion. Oh, did I mention I like to take pictures? If anything my box is a hot mess...but the most fun hot mess you'll ever meet! I promise. In a nutshell I grew up all over the United States. My mom and her other half, literally, had a dart board with a map attached to it and when the mood struck..they would toss a dart and off we would move. Can you imagine?! Yeah-I know!So growing up I was typically the new kid full of curiosity with a zest for chasing the sun, always on the go. What does this have to do with photography? Nothing yet, its just me and my messy little box that I like to pretend is not a box... So, after growing up throughout the states as a young wee-lil adventurer I eventually ended up in San Diego where I went to high school and eventually college only to discover that I had some SERIOUS wanderlust in which case I moved to the Hawaiian islands. Sold my car, packed my bags and off I went. First Oahu then to Maui then back to Oahu. Sounds nice? It was. Long story, you should ask me sometime. The words "Simply Amazing" don't quite do it justice. I managed to explore my hand at writing a fashion blog ( www.nosatisfashion.wordpress.com ) and styled my pants off while in the islands. So if you ever have any personal styling questions, or need your closet cleaned out, you can ask me about that too. I have a passion for LIFE and all the beautiful moments that come along with it. I remember such moments as a kid in the car, driving to wherever the next destination was, taking a glimpse inside other cars; a glimpse inside other peoples lives and today is not much different. Photography has always come natural to me and I feel privileged to be allowed to not just take a glimpse, but to capture these moments in such a manner that is both special and unique. Outside of the box, minus the hot mess of course. After all I am a professional. Perhaps you will allow me the honor to take a glimpse and capture a special memory in your life because, that's how I feel about photography: lucky and grateful to work in a craft that I love so much. If your a dreamer, a wanderer, an explorer or even just someone who follows their own personal dreams and goals then I bet we would not just get along, we might even become friends. <3 Want to find out? Contact me @Photography@Berlynn.co" kind of not sure if I should remove the whole bit about the hot mess, I like it...but not sure if some people would take it the wrong way. I am certainly open to changing it, but I do want to convey that I do multiple things (I have a degree in visual communications, fashion blog, photography, travel/nature freak) Do I need to keep it all about photography or can it really be more about me? Thank you in advance for your time. P.S. I do have another bit on my site about what type of photographer I am and what it is all about. It is more basic and to the point. So that's another reason I got a little more personal here. But again, open to suggestions. Thanks!