Feedback on my photo business website

<p>Id love to know what you all think of my website. I use zenfolio and recently changed the design.<br>

http://www.sarahashleyphotos.com</p>

<p>The layout and content seems fine but you may want to optimise the serving speed. On my middle of the road connection (5MBs) it is slow and a bit jerky.</p>

<p>Sarah, personally I think you should proofread the site. Nothing says "professional" like spelling errors - look under your products page and check the header. Loading speed seemed okay on my system.</p>

<p>Regards, James.</p>

<p>James. Thank you for catching that. I am not such a great speller. I will have someone go through my whole website today.</p>

<p>No problem Sarah, I would hope someone would do the same for me. All else aside, the site looks nice and flows well. I would recommend having an objective look through your galleries some day as some seem bloated to me. Ask yourself which ones are your <em><strong>absolute best</strong></em> and are what you want to represent your style. 90+ photos in weddings for example is not as important as say 20-30 images that really knock peoples socks off.</p>

<p>My two cents.<br>

Best luck, James.</p>

 

<p>Ya maybe it is time to delete some more. I like to give the brides a lot to look at though so they can see that I have experience. Your right though it probably is too much.</p>

<p>I think you may need to clean up your pricing section a little bit. <br />Wedding Pricing<br />- The Full Wedding Coverage Packages is a little crazy. Too much indentation and space between the lines. The indentation would be ok if it were more consistent throughout the site.<br /><br />You should remove the pricing catalog at the bottom. Everything should be on the website. It also doesn't work on mobile. <br /><br />For the whole site, check some of the line breaks. Some of the text seems to run off the page.<br /><br /><br /></p>

<p>I dont know what you mean about text running off of the page. I fixed the wedding pricing page though. </p>

<p>Much cleaner Sarah. Nice.<br>

<br />I think you fixed the runoff. When I saw it, the copy was running outside the border. I forgot where though. It seems to be gone now.</p>