website changes

<p>Hi everyone,<br>

A while back I asked for a critique of my website and received some excellent comentary. I have since made a number of changes and would appreciate another look and any compliments or critiques.<br>

Thanks in advance for taking the time to help!<br>

Tracey</p>

<p><a href="http://www.traceykidstonphotography.com">http://www.traceykidstonphotography.com</a></p>

<p>Hi Tracey,<br>

My name is Kenneth Nelson and I do website template modifications for righttempmod.com. First I love the site there is nothing like capturing animals in the wild through photos. Just a couple little things caught my attention that would stand your page out I think.<br>

1) For having such beautiful pics of the animals your page doesn't have a personal feel to it. Your about me section is written in a third person format. My idea more about you written by you give it your touch as well as your vision.<br>

2) Maybe touch it up with some sounds of the wild in the background, give the person viewing your site an illusion of nature.<br>

3) Kinda goes with the first one, how about in your about me section a picture of you. Again gives it a little more personality.<br>

I hope that my ideas aren't obtrusive in anyway, and if there is any questions you might have on how to do any of these things please don't hesitate to ask.<br>

Kenneth Nelson<br>

RightTempMod.com</p>

<p>I agree with Kenneth regarding the biography, IMO as your direct/personal site writing in first person has a more expected feel to it. Beautiful images, colors are bright and punchy on my monitor.<br>

Mark</p>

<p>Hello - Thank you both for the comments. I will consider making the changes to my biography section. I appreciate your time and effort!<br>

Tracey</p>