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November 4, 2007

sample

November 3, 2007

A clean background would help remove distractions. Hide the hand too. Try variations as there is a great potential here with the arrangement of the feet.

November 3, 2007

crop from restaurant to tower is much better

May 31, 2006

Very nice copmosition, needs straightening in PS (or a view camera)

December 17, 2003

if yoy had gotten closer, you could have something like this...

December 17, 2003

the building barely shows. the buildings on the side are just as dark as the flatiron building. Isee a keyhole shape around it -was that intentional?

December 17, 2003

it looks cluttered on the right side. If you had taken it so there is less of the frame showing, you could crop it out and get the keywhole/knob as the focus. nice textures. try zooming in on just keyhole?

February 13, 2003

super color + clean lines

January 8, 2003

The hot spot is from light coming in from a window on the other side. Nothing I could do about that at the time unless I moved down the isle. So, I made a version with the hot spot toned down a bit via PS. So far it is getting lower ratings!

January 2, 2003

I like it. The more I look the better it seems.

Maybe a little too much grain? or maybe the sky could fade a little?

November 10, 2002

See reflections II

October 22, 2002

I think its the best shot of the park.

October 17, 2002

Great!

October 17, 2002

Its very nice. The only thing I see wrong is it seems quite unbalanced.

Getting a good scan of highlights to come out well is very hard. The monitor or print will never do the slide justice.

October 17, 2002

This is the only one in the folder I really dont like. basically, far too symmetrical - porportions are mechanical. Dont even like the color. Since you've been there you likely have a larger involvement in the image than anyone else.

October 17, 2002

I'd rate it a 7/7 if I could. I have yet to make one good B/W - yet.

September 21, 2002

Kinda like it. Missing forehead. orange is a difficult color.

September 10, 2002

Eyes are important and you have captured them well. Things you can't control is how she moves and how the face blurs. Better is one motion and then a stop so the face is clearer. Here are two faces. Again its not a control thing but mostly luck. This is where you have to shoot a lot. Could also be cropped a lot on the right - this adds nothing.