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    More information about "Alone"

    Alone

    in Landscape

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    Good subject and good time to take it.But the grass line could be more straight or more tilted.It looks like you want it straight but it isn't straight.This is my personal and debatable opinion.

    bye Giuseppe

    More information about "Maya"

    Maya

    in Portrait

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    Lovely subject and pose, but the light don't work very well.Try to reflect flash light (with bounce flash) on the side.The direct flash light make flat tint of flesh.You probably have "erased" the red eyes, but I suggest you to leave some highlights (white if possible) in the pupil.I hope you understand my English.

    Bye Giuseppe

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