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ron wierman

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    Spring pond

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    I like it in black and white. What bothers me is that the sky is blown out but I can see nice texture from the clouds reflected in the water. I'd try to burn the sky to bring this out.

    Relax

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    Try burning the left elbow a bit to eliminate the highlight, it draws the eye away from the face. Also she seems to be twisting her torso slightly which gives the impression that her left breast is larger than her right. It looks odd to me...
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