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Clever. You integrated a set of very different shapes and tones.
Play with this: if you crop off the bottom four rails, the focus becomes the beautiful "floating" bridge, with the other elements leading to it.
Brandon
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I agree. Also it is slightly tilted (check the waterline).
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A rare juxtaposition of textures.
Brandon
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I agree with Jim.
Looking over several of your images, I like your "vision" - how you see.
Brandon
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That's fun!
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I like the basic idea. I played with it and some subtle editing will double the impact: 1. The frame of roof edges completes for attention with the central building. Crop the left and right about 10%. The fact of the frame will not be lost.
2. Playing with histogram controls, make the shadows blacker while giving up little detail. (A little more contrast.)
I am new here but if we can privately share email I will send you my edited version.
Not sure you can fully see what I mean in the reduced image the web page demands.
Brandon
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Wow. Good lines you composed. The emphasis is on the plants. If you want to show the relationship to the environment, I suggest crop about 10 to 15% off the bottom.
Looks better bigger.
Brandon