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I had a similar moment a few years ago -- ferns rather than corn. Couldn't pull the shot off, so it was great to see that someone got this image. Nice work. -
Wouldn't call the day dull at all -- the dramatic sky fits with the castle & rock nicely, so you timed it well. My first thought was this was photoshopped, given the way the castle and the rock have weathered to the same tone. Nice work.
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I think the tower is leaning back just a bit, else it's a great image.
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Strong image. I'd take the red off her face, though -- the scene is incongruous enough and I think the uneven patch of color is distracting.
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Nice image -- debating if the jumper might be a little closer to the dish -- it works nonetheless! -
Diagonals do work here -- pulling the figure toward the dark. Strong image
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I agree -- this works well with the neon in front of that dark, textured sky. Might take out the fixture in the upper left corner. He looks good as a square, too.
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A lot of living expressed in this face. The B&W version is stronger, more abstract. I was trying to figure out the lighting setup from the catchlights in his eyes, then I went back and noticed you took this at a Denny's. So much for the light placement!
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I like the way the water enters in the lower part of the image - nice graphic fit with the valley tumbling toward the stream from the tree. Great work. -
Classic theme, well done. The middle leaf in the lower third of the frame appears a bit too "hot" on my monitor, might burn that down a bit. -
And the sky is that blue -- you can leave the polarizer home. The Greek colors are blue and white -- blue for the sky and ocean, white for the clouds and waves.
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If the background's the subject, then you've hidden the subject. Highlights are blown out and, as is, it seems to be a record shot not an attempt at a composition. Sorry. -
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A bit of Diane Arbus influence or a tad of Mary Ellen Mark? Interesting portrait!
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Sky's too blue -- maybe too much polarization? -
Sorry, but you might turn the date stamp off. -
Greg, try working on the contrast and upload it again. One hopes there's an interesting critter in there.
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This reminds me of the high contrast stuff that was popular back in the 60's -- you may wish to crop it to a panorama aspect ratio & make it a bit of a surreal progression.
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Gloomy indeed. Big hulking bit of steel. I like the halo that surrounds the piping leading into the structure -- and the pipe brings your eye right to the thing. The building itself is a bit too dark -- hides some of the detail. Hey, the image works!
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I agree that this is stronger than the version with the tree -- greater sense of desolation and abandonment. I like the version with the road as well, although the curve of the road tends to pull your eye away from the house.
The house is well placed in the center of the top third of the frame. Nice work!
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This works well! Another nice image with supersaturated colors -- you're in a groove. Pay attention to John's comments, he's got some good suggestions.
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