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Beautiful work!

I like the makeup and the idea. My only nit is that it is a bit heavy on the jewels on the forehead (can distract from the face). Less is better in this case.

I like the lighting and pose. I am not sure what the effect you are going for on her head, but overall the energy of the shot is great!

I am testing a new style with more european flavor. I am not sure if

it works or not, so feedback of all kind is helpful. Don't worry, I am

not sensitive ;)

What an emotional and noire photo! This is very nice work of art! Two thumbs up! Creative indeed.

My only nit is the lighting on the face and hand. The face isn't as clear as it could be, espeically when it comes to her expression. The hands look too dark, which gives them strange bulk. Small nits to what otherwise is a very good piece of photography.

What a beautiful model and what a tender pose! Lucky to have shot that one. 

Good photo.

I love the composition, but the pose of the model is a bit ackward. 

Her wedding garb is a bit bulky on top and weigh the image off kelter.

The background is way too dark, especially when you consider the lighting on the model isn't too bright. Something more pastel would have worked better. The hair doesn't blend well with the background. I think this maybe some post editing issue there. Maybe a pink background and more gothic like black dress instead of pinkish dress on black background. Play with it.  Otherwise, it is very creative work and I love the feel of it.

It looks like a statue of Darth Insidious when he was younger... Do the people know what will soon befall them?

Tantalyzing pose. It makes you want to look ;)

The overall composition is very interesting. The execution is good.

There are a few nits about this picture that holds it back. Lucky, most of these nits you can fix in post.  

a) the color of the hair on the dark background don't match well

b) Hair out of control and covering her eye. I've run into ot myself a few times during portraits. It may require some edit and cloning, but it can be cleaned up.

c) Make up is a bit cheap looking. You may want to get better makeup on your models. You can still fix the makeup on this one in post, so it isn't a total loss.

d) Too much shadow on the neck area. It makes it a bit dark.

Otherwise, it is a pretty good photo! I think it will be great once you process these issues. Two thumbs up!

Thanks in advance.

Model is from Vietnam