jenniferazehner

Hello!

Scanned this image from film, took with my Bronica SQ-A/Tmax 400

film.

I am interested in street photography, capturing the fleeting moments

and feelings of motion one has on the streets of NYC.

Any advice? Any feedback? The darker blur in the upper left hand

corner... it was a person closer to me, does it distract? Add to the

"stealth" of the photo, framing the action? I am debating cropping it out,

to focus more on the boy and his ball, and the onlooker in the

background. Thoughts?

I appreciate the critiques so much! Thanks! :-)

really like the tension between the two characters due to the composition, and great detail in the shadows.  

Hello!

I'm still learning and would welcome any feedback regarding this image...

composition, exposure, what have you. Just some background... this is a

scan of a 35mm negative taken with a Pentax K1000. I have cropped the

image, have not otherwise manipulated the image.

Have a wonderful day!