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stnoonan

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    Pelican

          14
    Or I should say, one just like it. I would prefer the image without the bird, or at least the bird positioned in a brighter area of the water. That said, I still like the shot.
  1. I dunno, ask her to dance for you? I like the shot. The light break slicing across the middle of the the frame and through the head is my only peeve. Maybe a slightly different angle of view would be helpful, but I do like the shot.

    Untitled

          3
    This is a nice scene. The tree on the right looks like it received some flash which makes it stick out and generally cramps the rest of the scene. If you can, try this shot again and lose the tree from the frame.

    Eyes

          93
    Her hand is distracting here. It is too close to the lens and appears very large in proportion to her face. This might have been better if her chin was ever so slightly higher, making a more pleasant angle of view with her eyes. Lighting is great and makeup is beautiful.

    Lunchtime for 4

          3
    If you look at the "eyebrow" in this picture, it is not nearly as defined as a female purple's should be. Also in the picture entitled "Moma Purple Finch feeding week old babies" you get a good view of a buffy striped rump which is indicative of a female house, where a female purple should be white. Purples want to nest in conifers, house finches almost anywhere - including man-made structures.

    Hostage

          21
    Sorry but I'm not a fan this shot. The children just seem too happy to match the mood of the rest of the scene. Maybe they are thinking about a nice ransom for capturing the lizards? I don't know but it just doesn't blend well.
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