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    Untitled

          15
    I really like this. Her eyes punch through just enough enough to make it work. It'd be better I think if I could see her left eye a was visible little more, but even so, the eyes are strong enough to make it work as is. Great work!

    on the rice field

          14
    Absolutely beautiful! My critique would be that the bush right behind her and in front of her distract a little. If she had been just depicted in this same scene but just without those two things it would be perfect to me. It is beautiful like it is though, the colors and atmosphere are really nice.

    Pears

          15
    I love this. The third pear from the left seems to be worried about the pear that is laying down. Very PIXAR esque. Aside from that humor value, it is wonderfully put together and has great tones and textures. Great job.

    Untitled

          4
    I certainly wouldn't clone out the bit above the eye unless it was going onto a magazine cover or something. Really interesting portrait, well setup. I like it very much. One critique I would mention is that the ton of the hand and the chest are a little to close to me, and they merge a bit (at least on my screen). I would like to see a little separation there. Really like it though!

    Field of Wheat

          7
    Thank you for your comments. Asla you are right, there was definitely things to left and right that really limited what Icould include in the scene. I wanted to include the wonderful tall wheat leading up to the tree. Now that you mention that hint, I should probably try to get rid of that bit by cropping a bit more or in PS for printing. Thank you for the feedback.

    against the light

          43
    This is really superb. I've done this sort of shot before and seen attempts a hundred times, but this is one of the most striking I've seen. Very graphic and so much interest.

    Stillness

          10
    Without the lady it would still be a great image, though an image no different than anyone else would have taken in that same spot. Your placement of the lady under the tree gives it something extra special and makes it a unique piece. It is perfect.
  1. It is really beautiful. My constructive critique of the image is that the little single strands of hair are distracting to me. The ones that are running mostly horizontal in the image. It does add to the whimsical effect for me, but if they weren't there I think it would be an even stronger image. Thank you for sharing, I really like it.

    Untitled

          30

    Wow! Simply beautiful. Even without the people it would be pretty, but the people give it an extra something. Thanks for sharing.

     

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