brian_lau

<p>Good start Rachel. One quick thing - align that button on the rates page to the left with the rest of the copy. Also change the text to Click here and you can link it to your contact page if that's what you want visitors to do.</p>

<p>Try http://www.wordpress.com.</p>

<p>Yeah. Pricing can be tricky. I had cheap rates for <a href="/website-creation-forum/http:/www.stomping.net">website design</a> when I started out. I increased them over time since I had more experience and was getting better. I've seen photography packages that are $3,000 and others like $100. I'm guessing they are equally successful if they stick with those rates. I don't really recommend the $100 route if you are good though. haha.</p>

<p>Much cleaner Sarah. Nice.<br>

<br />I think you fixed the runoff. When I saw it, the copy was running outside the border. I forgot where though. It seems to be gone now.</p>

<p>haha. I meant that I miss Flash for desktops. The really well done sites were efficiently made. I got sick of the music loops too. I stopped those real quick. Flash sites were better for promotional use. I don't recall any content based flash websites.</p>

<p>I think you may need to clean up your pricing section a little bit. <br />Wedding Pricing<br />- The Full Wedding Coverage Packages is a little crazy. Too much indentation and space between the lines. The indentation would be ok if it were more consistent throughout the site.<br /><br />You should remove the pricing catalog at the bottom. Everything should be on the website. It also doesn't work on mobile. <br /><br />For the whole site, check some of the line breaks. Some of the text seems to run off the page.<br /><br /><br /></p>

<p>Hi Jody. Try to add a blog. Also make sure you stay focused with your content like Sarah suggested. No landscapes at all if you are doing portrait photography. Put yourself in a customer's shoes. If they are looking at a portfolio, they want to see how well to take photos of people. Also fix the address at the bottom. You have an extra comma.<br>

Good luck!</p>

<p>Unfortunately Apple helped kill Flash. At the same time, Flash was flawed functionally as it didn't work very well with search engines. You need to get the original files and recode the website. Man, I miss Flash websites. They're so much more interesting than html ones.. even the animated html ones.</p>

<p>If you can, add a blog to your website and keep a photo journal. Add some contact information and pricing if you want. Combine that with a facebook account and you will be off to a good start in promoting yourself. People will go to your website more often if there is fresh content.</p>