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The models , the poses, the photography, lighting, first class.

The main and best thing.

Its looks as though youre trying to sell the merchandise

And thats very very good

best regards

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Shoot this model again. This time try to imagine shes Nicole Kidman and photograph a series with her accordingly.

At the moment this picture hovers between a hair picture and a fashion picture

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Very good fashion picture, Comments same as the other one, Great hair, make up,mood and setting.

These two pictures must be the best Ive seen in the fashion section.

Watch these models though, they have a habit of spreading their fingers when posing and its an eye trap. This model has done it with both hands

If she has to hold up the dress with her left hand then it would be better done underneath the fabric as this would solve three problems. It would give contrast to the hands, help the dress hang in a better way and further emphasise its sheerness and see-throughness

good show

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This is one of the best fashion pictures ive seen here so far. Let me explain why. The model is beautiful and her Hair MU and pose are just right for this quiet tranquil picture (perhaos her right hand gesture could have been more relaxed to fit in with this mood).

To heighten these very nice effects, the model could dominate the space more so that the fashion becomes principal. Also you may be too honest so need to cheat more via PS. eg a pixel stretch+ because the dress has an edwardian feel to it liquefy the waist to give more of that exciting shape.

This really works and it makes a good fashion picture into a great one with magazine qualities.

like this example

Great work

regards

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Nice commercial shot. Not sure about the fur though too many issues???

But get in closer theres no need for all the white space and try cheating with PS more

but it needs some PS to maximise the emotional investment. Did you use autofocus the foreground tree is sharp which may mean your focus has wandered, This spoils the soft look to the model.

Ive got a note about using PS here

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Is it really a Versace dress??

There needs to be an attitude assigned to it. The model isnt saying anything about the dress.

In Steven Meisels 'Four days in LA' the models say it all,they have the lookback look that says " Who they hell are you? How did you get in here?"

Your picture is good but work the models more assign them an attitude

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most of the pictures in the 'fooling around' in fact you could make a fashion series out of nearly all your sets of pictures. They have great potential as a signature.

Maybe the watering can has too much principality in this picture and the girls face hasnt assigned an attitude to the image but she holds the can beautifully

I love what youre doing

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...Cuteness these and the other pictures you have are great fashion pictures. Hope a real fashion series is coming

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