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jpalmer57

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    Lines-0897

          1

    Though it looks like a city center its in a suburb that is billing it

    self as a 'town center'.

    Comments and suggestions for improvement, please. Thank you.

  1. This is a striking image, very interesting composition with an unusual color treatment that, while using different tones, is very pleasing.  I would like to see it with a bit more room on the top, it feels slightly squashed.  The more I look at it the more I like it.

  2. Paul,


    I can't offer a critique because I can't think of anything to criticize, anything that could make it better.  Minimalist in overall design but with detail and texture in the wall.  I personally like exploring the textures in walls.  You have found an excellent wall in an interesting and different setting.  Well seen and captured.  A new reference image for me.

    split screen

          5

    Beautiful. I love the way it captures movement in many forms yet nothing is actually moving.  Sculpted sand, drifted snow and eroded fence presenting different kinds of curves in different directions but still seem to tie together.  Mostly nice subtle colors, except I don't particularly like the pink along the far end of the fence.  Altogether an excellent image.  Well done!

    Whirlpool Point

          3

    Dominic,

    I like this image, the way you kept the colors soft to keep with the soft light.  Especially in the sky.  The only thing that bothers me (and it's just me) is that the horizon line at the end of the water isn't quite level.  But a nice image.

    Regards,

    Jim

    Untitled

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    Agustin,

    This is just wonderful.  The subtle shift of color across the lower part and up through the 'sky' gives a feeling of depth and three-dimensionality.  This is an example of why I'm signed up on Photo.net, to see images like this so I can try to improve my own art.  Thank you for sharing this excellent image.

    bikeboy

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    Francisco, very good use of lines to draw the eye into the scene and right to the biker.   My only thought is that I get distracted by the stuff on the top of the far building.  I think I'd try cropping the image to get rid of that.  Excellent composition.  Really strong.

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