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jurek

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    Nice composition and good choice in B/W. Unfortunately everything seems a bit out of focus - was that intended? Why? Also the hand position seems strange, as if caught in mid movement, which subtracts from the thoughtful nature of the portrait. I like the fact that there is very little make up and no "skin smoothing".

    Untitled

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    Janis, I love all your pictures! Each one makes me smile because I think I feel your joy of making them. This picture is my favorite for some reason. I am looking forward to visiting your portfolio again!

     

    Keep taking these photos!

    Drop

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    One could write a PhD thesis on the physics of shown in this picture. Very fascinating to think about what's involved. Great shot!

    Untitled

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    I would be tempted to cut off the bottom of the picture with all that boring carpet and underexpose a bit to saturate the color in the stained glass window. Very nice!

    look

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    The eyes got it! Very nice! This is one of these pictures that the beauty of it does not depend so much on a beauty of the model. Congratulations!

    Family Portrait

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    For me this picture could use more contrast. The man's "hair light" is a bit too strong. Whatever it is above their heads is distracting becasue it's incomplete or it's not all that obvious what it is, so it atracts attention. Man's left hand seems unnaturally twisted. Her chair is higher than his, giving the picture a tilted look. Woman's and boy's hands are too piled up, creating a large group. I am picking at your picture in order to help you. Please do not take it personally. In many ways it's a great picture. I like tthe choice of background color and pattern. And it helps that the folks are all good looking.
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