mjobk
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The simplicity of this image brings out the sexy form of this model. The grain is essential and wonderful. I do wonder how another photo would look if we could see more of her face. Great job. -
The top of the cross/pole is too high in the frame.
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This is my favorite of the series. Simple but with lots of expression and pathos. -
Very nice! The fisherman is too low in the frame, I think re-framing to exclude some of the sky and move the fisherman further into the photo would improve it. Well done, are you taking this from a bridge?
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Very cool, but I think you need to have the Mantis' right eye in focus. Easier said that done I know. -
This is a really great portrait. Her hair frames her face softly as does the light. Good composition with hands and arms. This photo stands out from the rest, good job. She must be very happy with your work!
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Very nice, what temple is this and where?
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Gorgeous! Excellent composition, even the flock of brids are in the right place. -
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I have to agree with the above post, that tree detracts from the image. I think it would have been easy to position yourself better so that the tree/trees could have lead the eye into the picture.
Great contrast between the foreground and mountain, I also wonder how it would look if the mountains and foreground were more equal. Can or did you shoot this scene differently?
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Good subject matter, composition and tone but I think showing some motion would improve this image. It seems very posed, too static, like hes balancing and not moving at all on his bike.
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This is excellent! It's sexy, well composed and has that element of what's going and why. To offer some criticism I'd have included her boots in the frame, but perhaps this would have changed the photo entirely. Whatever is blowing in the wind---her shirt---should also not break the line of the building in the background. Post more of this shoot if you have them.
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This ones great! They're both leaning away and the guys face! Well done, I bet it took some patience to get this one.
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Very good street photo, you got 3 people/levels captured here. But, if your photo is good enough to be described as 'great' or other such adjectives, the photo should stand by itself, without your explaining it and pointing out what's happening. Yes I know it's difficult to get some attention to your photos, even the good ones, on photo.net. That presents a very difficult challenge, keep practicing, you have a sense for timing already so good luck!
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I agree with the above post, interesting and energetic pose, nice grain but she just doesn't have enough space.
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Excellent! Great light, composition and color, one to put on the wall.
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Great lighting, composition and capture of this moment. Definitley my favorite in this folder. Well done. -
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I would prefer if the background was burned in more, it's a little distracting as my eye goes there. Good composition. -
I like it, it reminds me of home (ha). But if you want a real dazzler you are going to have to wait for an evening where the light is stunning and the orange and pinks are very bright. Does this photo look like that night is what you should ask yourself.
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