stephen carey
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I like your idea of presenting the girl as an average berliner'. Unfortunately in this picture every time I try to focus on the name plate my peripheral vision draws me back to the unfocused girl. First of all, this makes the picture seem like two pictures. Secondly, this gives the impression of an unintentionally out of focus picture. Maybe moving behind the girl, bringing both subjects closer to each other would have allowed my eyes to see the whole picture at once.
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I am a student interested in a general critique of my work. I used DOF
for the effect. The only photoshopping was to spot the image and give
it a black border (to recreate printing full frame). Thank you in
advance for your comments.
steve