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    Your constructive criticism greatly appreciated. This is one version of a

    shoot of a 8 year old girl. She is a princess with a smile like an angel and I

    wanted to accentuate that in the post processing.

  1. I like this a lot. BW with a little color works nicely, and I like it that you have put attention to detail. Good quality picture overall. Maybe the top part of the picture could use a bit more light, to separate the hair from the backround. Could be my monitor though, crappy one at the office.

     

  2. This one is great! There are a lot of things and details to look at. I like the body language of the guys facing each other and the grill guy. Two fingers up and the tongs work together nicely with the "twins". Also the stripes on the shirt and barn wall and the plaid patterns on the black and white shirts add tension and another level to the image.

    Also the guy in the backround is a nice little detail, athough it would be even better if the guy was just standing with his hands in the pockets or something. The flowers in the foreground are a little disturbing, and make the corner of the image a little too crowded, but otherwise this is a really good snapshot of what I assume is not a staged situation.

    Walk of love

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    Nice composition, I like the bicycles in the backround and especially the guy on the right with a smile. The bride and groom are heading to the same direction with the riders and they are looking to that direction also. That adds to the strong sense of direction in the picture. The backlight is nice, yet the couple is evenly lit. Their positions and smiles are natural. Great capture, there are a lot of things that could be wrong here but aren't!

    Jack

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    I like it, nice tones, good quality overall. But the eye(s) seem a bit overdone to my liking, little too "terminator" for my taste.  I might want to see more outlines on the left side of the face, now the face seems to disappear into the black backround. Could be my monitor at the work place though.

  3. Very nice, I like the reflections on the water as well as the details in the foreground. Although I might have chosen a tighter crop to give the center rock a bigger role in the composition. Initially the lower corners look like they were streched by the distortion from the lens, but on closer look you can see its the shape of the rocks that does it.

    The colors add up to the overall feeling nicely. I like it that you haven't added saturation too much.

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