kah_hoe_wan

Picture is very interesting. the composition is great but not as skillful as one would think . i get it, it has nice lines and symmetry but its just too straight, and feels like it was pushed. Its still a great photo tho.
What doesn't work is the HDR kinda feel going on with this picture, it feels bland. It will be better if the photo has lights and darks, shadows and highlights. Maybe even in black and white.

composition and face expression and pose feels real and not pushed.

watch out for lights and darks. his right hand face and the left side of this fur hoody is OK exposed and  -0.25 will bring back the details.

the upper to corners has vignetting. its works with the photograph but i know it will work without it to. unless there is a good reason for  to put it. i would take it off.

it is in the details- that is how one photographer sets himself apart (among other things)

this photo don't give me much.
-its slightly over processed, from what i can see from the ambient light, it would be more interesting if the image was processed to have more lights and more darks.
-the story is lacking, i can only see one man showing the other man something. i don't get anything that they are father and son. their is no concept, no symbolize, no juxtaposition, no contrast of subject.
-Water bottles and a shovels in the background gives me something but not much.
-most importantly the faces of the two subjects are lost. in this case if the shot was closer in detailed to your faces might work.
-solution: wait for something, a reaction, a face expression, go closer. position them in a background that tells more, shoot them with foreground. middle, and background elements. or what if a closer shoot of them close enough where their top heads bleeds off the photo, close enough to get all the details of your cloths, hands, facial lines, shoes, and what that guys is showing him.