stephen gale uk

I don't think that it is too dark, in fact, I think the sky might benefit from being a little darker/more saturated. The details are on just being held in the sky and the foreground rather dominates the image as is. Hope this helps.

I am interested in any feedback on this image.

 

Thanks,

 

S.

This has potential, but the image cries out for a vertical rather than horizontal orientation. I find the dark area in the background to camera left distracting. The lighting on the model's face kind of fits the attitude and works well. Hope this helps.

The highlights here are way too hot, e.g. on her arm and we are starting to loose some important detail. The image seems to light overall to me and we are starting to see detail in the black background where I assume it should be just black.

 

Great looking model, but the contrast in this image needs attention.

I like the eye contact and the skin tone looks OK to me (it is just about on the limit of being acceptable - you would not want it any lighter).

 

I think the multiple catchlights in the eyes are a little distracting.

 

I am also surprised that you didn't darken down the black background a tad. Take a look a the "levels" in Photoshop and you will see what I mean. Adjusting the black levels will really make her jump off the page. Hope this helps.

Nice tonal range and DOF. I like how you have managed to keep all the verticals and horizontals square.

The only comment here is that I find the top right corner just a little too dark - it is a little over-powering and doesn't match the rest of the sky. Other than that, I really like it as a shot. I think it works well.