I liked the other version of this that I saw the other day...where one of the model's eyes was open and the other shut. It had a tension that was interesting.
This is out of focus in the wrong way -- just enough to look like a mistake, not enough to look intentional. Dump this, keep the other.
Also - critiques here (and on every other site on the net I have visited) are a very mixed bag. At least people said something -- I had over 400 people look at one image -- only 1 commented and only 3 left ratings -- which leaves me wondering, well, what did the other 396+ think? Ratings are ok I guess --- I don't really understand the ratings system and so avoid using it -- I think I'd be too tempted to give all photos either a 1 or a 10 --- but written comments show that at least they looked and took time to respond.
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This is out of focus in the wrong way -- just enough to look like a mistake, not enough to look intentional. Dump this, keep the other.
Also - critiques here (and on every other site on the net I have visited) are a very mixed bag. At least people said something -- I had over 400 people look at one image -- only 1 commented and only 3 left ratings -- which leaves me wondering, well, what did the other 396+ think? Ratings are ok I guess --- I don't really understand the ratings system and so avoid using it -- I think I'd be too tempted to give all photos either a 1 or a 10 --- but written comments show that at least they looked and took time to respond.