peter_langfelder

September 30, 2010

Nice photo. What I would try to improve: 1. exposure, the waterfall seems overexposed, 2. I would experiment with composition, if possible getting close to the waterfall since there's a lot of not very interesting space between the foreground and the waterfall itself.

September 30, 2007

I like the composition, with lines of tulips leading to the mill and the mill pointing to the clouds. I'm not a fan of such unrealistic colors, but to each his own.

September 22, 2004

The contrast between her hair and the wall is much better on the left side than the right side; more backlight or a hairlight would help.

September 11, 2004

Same here. Crop away the foreground and shift the composition to the left, there's too much empty space on the right while the left is too tight.

May 16, 2003

Interesting image. The central composition doesn't work very well, in my opinion, in the rectangular format - I would crop a bit from the left to make the image more square-ish.

May 7, 2003

I wouldn't crop any of the bottom, but perhaps try to bring out a bit more detail in it, especially in the stump on the left. I feel that leaving some space above the rock formations actually adds to the feeling of space in the photo. Nice job!

May 2, 2003

Nice and smooth shapes. Velvia contrast makes it even better.

November 14, 2002

Very interesting geometric composition, though I must say it seems to work better in smaller sizes. I would definitely try to convert this to black and white.

November 14, 2002

Looking for comments on composition and general suggestion on

improving. Do the fallen leaves work in suggesting Fall?

October 29, 2002

Looks interesting, though a bit unreal. Too bad the house is burned out, at least in the scan.

October 29, 2002

I like this photo a lot. Very nice composition, clean and simple lines, just enough of the blue skies, looks excellent in the square format. Only nitpick is the black face of the rock in foreground.

October 13, 2002

Nice shot. I like the water dropping from the dog's tail, it suggests dymanics and motion. My only complaint is that the dog's

face is, in contrast to the tail, a bit static and featureless, at least at the magnification I get on the monitor.

October 4, 2002

Very nice.

October 4, 2002

Nice shot. I like the contrast between the wild river and the moody trees and clouds in the background.

October 3, 2002

Nice photo, cought my eyes instantly. My only complaint is that the sled is too central - I would move it a bit to the right to make it work better with the building on the left (or just crop the right part). The dark building on the right doesn't add much in this magnification.

September 25, 2002

It's a nice photo. You could try to warm it up a bit by changing the color balance. It may also help to make the foreground stand out a bit more.

September 21, 2002

Very nice. The clouds taking up most of the space ib the photo are dark and mysterious (the night is taking over), the colors are great (kudos to Velvia :-)), and the far bright area is the little piece of day that's left and going away fast. I think the exposure is right; adding a stop wouldn't add anything interesting in the clouds, but would dilute the colors a lot. The far bright part has just enough yellow color; adding exposure would make it completely washed out. Yeah, it may not be the greatest sunset picture of all times, but it's certainly good.

September 21, 2002

Interesting picture. The converging verticals work, but would be better if the tower in the left had its top in the picture.

September 18, 2002

Very nice picture. I like the blurred waterfall, it goes well with the overall atmosphere of the photo. I'm not sure about the big black rock in the upper left corner, though. I wish it wasn't leaning so heavily into the picture, so to speak.

Vela stastia pri dalsom foteni v Slovenskom Raji! :-)

September 2, 2002

Beautiful image, great composition and tonality.

August 31, 2002

It's a nice photo, but I see two different moods in it, and they don't mesh very well for me - the cheerful bright blue sky and the darker, moody, foggy center with trees and water. Perhaps separating them into two pictures would give a more unified mood to each.

August 31, 2002

I like the composition and the fact that the eye is looking into the empty space. Even the depth of field, limited to the nearer part of the eye, works for me, making the far edge of the face nicely blurred.

August 22, 2002

Very nice photo! Only the colors look a bit unnatural - perhaps leaving the balance a touch cooler would provide a more realistic feel.

July 19, 2002

Beautiful shot. I would actually crop the flower out, its darkness and fuzzyness feels a bit out of place in what otherwise looks like a peaceful landscape.