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haim_toeg

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    I think the idea behind this photo is interesting, the execution is lacking. The composition is

    too tight and claustrophobic, I'd rather see a wider perspective, enhancing the concept of an

    empty room with TV only. Technically, the contrast is insufficient, the child's face blends into

    the window frame and therefore is not clearly visible. Additionally, the electrical conduit

    cutting through the child's face and neck is distracting, as well as the communications tower

    visible through the window.

     

    Curtains on the windows would have solved many of those problems.

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    I like the composition, the tonal range and the light. I think the picture would have worked much better with a smaller aperture and larger dof.
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