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The skin tone and lightning is well done, but her expression is not appealing to me. Her hands should have been more relaxed also but spreading her fingers a little more.

A good composition and pose, but a bit underexpose.  I would have love to see more of her legs.

I like this one.  Skin tone is very pleasant and warm color.  But. crop at the join is not my cup of tea.

The composition is interesting, but her skin should be whiter to make her stand more.  Our eyes are drawn to the lights instead of her.

Focus seem a little off. Maybe to much use of clarity too or over-sharpeness?

Exposition and focus are perfect. But the image almost look like HDRish to me. My eyes are drawn to the white cloud in the upper left section. Tonal seem to neutral to me.

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I would like a critique of this photo. Be honest, tell me what you thinking of

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I would like a critique of this photo. Be honest, tell me what you thinking of

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I would like a critique of this photo. Be honest, tell me what you thinking of

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Probably my favorite nude picture.

The model pose following the dead tree shape,... wow!

I love how each ridge seem almost like a repetition of the previous one.

Love the composition.  Nicely done.

Love the line form from her leg, torso and head.  Maybe this line may have been straighten a little.

Thank you all for your kind comments.

I didn't realize she was looking at me.  I agree this look weird.  I may have to Photoshop that, but I'm not a big fan of Photoshop manipulation.

I can't wait to try this again.  I was very relax during the photo shoot. I was prepared and I know exactly what I was shooting for.  Having a plan help me a lot.

A photo taken during my first solo nude session. I was trying to create a

low-key hight contrast image.

Yes, it was.

Love it.

Maybe if both her arms were inside the window frame, that would have help separate her from the background.

Also, here another variation you could have try.  Make her jump so to fully capture her against the window.

But, I like the pose and light.  Good work.