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    More information about "the way to the sky"

    the way to the sky

    in Landscape

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    I love the colours and the composition. The only things I don't love are the vignetting in the corners. Also I think you might want to work on the contrast at the bottom of the photograph. I love the details in the bottom, but they don't really jump out of the page. Good job.
    More information about "Untitled"

    Untitled

    in Portrait

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    I like the photo and the pose, but I don't like the way that the shadows of the models arms fall on her face. Maybe you could clear that up with a bit of front fill light or flash.
    More information about "Bumblebee"

    Bumblebee

    in Macro

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    Great composition! I think that your poor camera is pushed a bit far. The quality is suffering due to JPEG artifacts, chromatic abberations and massive cropping. I love the image, but the quality of the final output looks low. Maybe see if you can get some other lens in front of the camera in the reverse position to get better magnification without cropping. Good luck!
    More information about "Untitled"

    Untitled

    in Landscape

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    Just looking for what other people think. Is it to unnatural, or

    does it work for you?

     

    This is a composite image of the moon by itself and the sky and

    foreground as separate images at separate exposures. The moon has

    been slightly (but not massively enlarged). Exposure adjusted in

    curves.

     

    Let me know what you think.

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