ian_mcmillan

Great shot!

You're still capturing the character of the wall with tremendous detail, and the model is fantastic. The next shot in the series..to me...should be her about 5 feet off the ground as she ascends to heaven!

Beautiful work!

For me, this shot works so much better than the previous one!

You have manged to really pull the detail of the wall into the scene. The only negative, I think, is that the model is still a little lost overall. I still think composing with a super-wide angle....maybe a 10-20 mm ....and letting the model fill the foreground would make it pop. Then the wall and the model would share equal billing.

I'm not sure which lens would be best in this setting, but it should be a wide angle of some sort. you need to get much closer to the model without losing the impact of the geometry in the wall itself. I would love to see another attempt.