denis haskin

July 12, 2002

I think you're headed in the right direction (no pun intended). But I would crop the left eye either completely out or completely in.

July 12, 2002

Very interesting. Shame that the car interior is visible in the upper left. Would be better without it. Oh well!

July 12, 2002

Great idea! I like it. Although the lack of symmetry because of the light holes visible under some of the bottles is distracting.

July 12, 2002

Nice shot--maybe crop it in tighter on just the truck and the church? Leave the car to the left out of it?

July 12, 2002

Nice--although took me a while to figure out what the kid was looking at. I wonder if it might be better lightened up a bit?

July 12, 2002

I like it (more as graphic design than as photo, but wth...). I agree if you're going to do that much to it in Photoshop, get rid of the strand of hair... very distracting.

July 12, 2002

Nice light, but I'm not crazy about the composition--and not sure if it can be fixed by cropping. Was there a better vantage point? The trees at the left don't add anything.