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I do like the pic, but I would consider a much tighter crop.

If it is a staged pic, I would have placed one of the kites into the self-launch position.

The pic has plenty of the dead space in the foreground and the second person on the picture is being a distraction.

Great Picture. I do think it is the best one in the folder.

 

I was surprised by the tolerance of this forum up untill a second ago and was about to comment that this picture is successful in being art: out of more then hundred of thousands viewers no-one mentioned it being porn. I guess the ratio of 1:100461 is not bad also :-)

 

However, no photo.net from work till next Monday for me.

My attention is constantly shifting to the hand. Was there a ring? The hand seems to be unproportionally big comparing to the head (wide lens?) I would try to add more accent to the face of the model. Like the image.