keith_strickland

The eyes do not have any cathchlight in them which makes the eyes look dead,try to use a fill light or reflector next time.Look at photos of fashion models etc and you can see the catchlights,from them you can also work out the lighting set up they have used.

Hope this helps.

Keith

This is a great first portrait!

I love it!

The composition is good,the lighting good with just a hint of catchlight in both eyes and the model is expressive and you have made her look beautiful.

Keep up the good work!

I dont know? I think it appears to (Me) to have a bondage / helpless look to it.

Regards

Keith

Thank you for your kind words,Kenneth.

Regards

Keith

Hi All

Any constructive criticism is welcome.

Ilike this one as it shows his cheeky nature.

Thanks

Keith

Hi any constructive criticism is welcome.

Thanks

Keith