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adamczyk

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    Hard life

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    Hi,

    Very nice portrait, although if you want to do more justice to the title "Hard Life" Perhaps some more selective sharpening to the wrinkles on his forehead and cheeks would add more drama.  This might improve on the hard life look.  Otherwise this is a great portrait.  Eyes are perfect, exposure for the sunlight conditions is spot on. I would try to clone out the stray hair from his beard that overlap the furry part of his coat on the left side of the photo. 

    Tom

    Untitled

          23

    I like the lighting, the smoothness of the face, the contrasty make up, the details in the face, but.....the hair does not match the rest of the photo.  It just too "messy" for the rest of the photo.  You tried to get beauty from simplicity, simple and beautiful, but the stray hair on the backgroud is distracting. Also if would be nice to see the hair bruched of combed a bit, or make it more wild. 

    Tom

    kid by the sea

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    From a technical point of view: Excellent, from a personal point of view: Makes me wanna go to the beach, put my feet in the water and relax. Great capture!

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