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rachiddahnoun

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    Final in b/n

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    I really like the composition and the idea behind this image. The blurriness of the person walking distracts me. I want to concentrate on the dog but I have a hard time doing it. You may want to think about burning in the person and the doorway a bit to make it darker. I think that will lend to the overall success of the image. I do really like the overall tonality of the image minus the person and the doorway. Great concept!
  1. Your composition is fantastic. Very powerful. There is a lot of noise in the photo though, especially on the underside of the bridge. If it's an HDR image you may want to think about exposing for the shadows a little more next time. Good luck, happy shooting.

     

    Rachid Dahnoun

    rachid@instantxposure.com

    www.instantxposure.com

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