ilona_larue1

The cat look a bit apprehensive, but who can blame it. My Cat ( also orange ) has his front paws on the glass nonstop whailing - I am getting kidnapped ! all way to the vet... great shot !

Best wishes

Ilona

This photo is one of my favourite.. I was scrambling to do something for

photoclass homework , -that night.. the assignment was "portrait with

natural low light" Mark, our handy-man happen to be around with his

dog Ruby and they were kind enough to pose for me.. ( even Ruby

stopped moving long enough...) Thank you for looking at my photo !

Ilona

I want my backyard look just like that !

I hate to be a wet blanket, but i don't quite get it... I want to ask where the focus of the photo is, but i am afraid, it is in our face - just a little to much... you have categorized the pic as "fashion" what type ? shoes ? hair ? she is wearing dancing shoes ( ? ) yet laying in bed and playing a gitar ? if the photo mean to be sensual... it is closer to pornographic then artistic... now that said, I would suggest, try to compose a little more subtle... the fishnet hose... gotta go, not sexy... if the subject does not have nice skin, cover with soft material.. lil' less eye make up, if the gitar between her leg is a symbol...again, try to be a little less obvious... Perhaps we needed to know a little more about what your idea was taking this pic, because i am missing it... sorry if I was too hars, I am a fashion designer, I am looking at from the woman's point of view... sometimes less is more...

Best

Ilona

Hi,

I am a beginner photographer ( hobby shooter, rather) I like to know

what people think of my work... hyper criticism welcome !

This is my cat he is about to pounce on the bee on the lavender

bloom...planning on submitting the photo at the Clark County fair....