erik_asgeirsson

I like the black and white. The color distracts me too much from the harsh reality of the subject. It's showing a war zone, not a child's playhouse.

Beautiful image. Very peaceful and nostalgic.

Any critique or comments are welcome.

Critique and ratings welcome.

Good shot.

I would have given the negative greater exposure and less development (although since you used color film, this doesn't really apply) to get detail in the shadow on the lower left and keep the highlights printable. A orange or red filter durning exposure would have brought out the clouds, and even then there may still be too much sky for my taste. The rule of thirds here, with 1/3 sky and 2/3 foreground, would work nicely here. Then, in the printing stage, burn in the mountain and the sky so the mountain doesn't seem so washed out (although a red filter will cut through the haze if that was the problem).

Any comments would be greatly appreciated.

Critique welcome!