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it works for me, only a few small details like the bra strap and maybe a bit of retouching around the neck. Those eyes are amazing it looks like you have pumped up the color in them, or was she looking into a green wall because the whites of the eyes are green too?

hi, personally i think the pose looks a little awkward to me and doesnt quite suit the setting. Because the model is wearing casual clothes (taking off the watch would be good too) perhaps a more casual pose would work better especially in the park which is usually associated with relaxing etc. I like the lighting though, its flattering and is warmer than the ambient which works well. Overall not bad.

there was a bit of post on this one, im wondering if i went too far?

i love the shot, im wondering is that grey paper under glass that got that effect? Its really effective

wow it looks great, kind of looks rendered. Did you trigger that manually or use one of those motion triggers to get the timing? I love the colors too, very nice. I'm looking at it though wondering if the camera was straight just that it looks like the shot is leaning to the left or maybe its just my monitors not horizontal (got one of those ones you can spin around). anyway good work

i can only offer what i would do, i used to shoot alot of this stuff in london and i would say it depends on what the shot would be for, if its for the watch as a whole i would say its a bit too much side, if its for the band then its great, perhaps the side of the watch could do with a bit more of a grad going through it to pick out the shape a little more, it looks like you lit the metal with white reflectors (i could be wrong) try using a screen and firing a grid spot through that, it will give you nice smooth graduated reflections in the metal. just a thought.

hi, i love the shot, very clean and stylish, one quick note, it looks like you ve done quite a bit of airbrushing (unless shes one of those perfect girls) which looks good, just a shame to leave out the feet.

Hi Gerardo, i love the shot, my only suggestion is to retouch out the fly aways at the side of the hair and also below the lips but only in the far left corner of the shot. I know its supposed to be a wild hair shot i just think it needs a little more form, i would leave the hair below the lip which is coming into shot and also the ones from the side which are coming towards the lip, its just those few in the bottom left corner which are drawing my eye and confusing the composition.

 

hi guys im just interested in anyones comments, its too hard to try and

judge your own photos. If any amateurs would like some help or advice

on their shots i would only be too happy to help, you can also look at

my website if you want to see more.

thanks in advance