marlon

The ONLY thing sticking out to me is that little stain the middle that my eye keeps catching! Very cool abstract shot. The diagonal white concrete contrasts well with the horizontal darker blocks, and the railings provide good contrast. I can see this looking awesome printed big in a black frame. Great angle and perspective.

Was looking at the review for the lens when this stood out to me. Made me smile!!!

Very modern and edgy. Goes great with the motorcycle. I like the flare too. The low angle is a nice touch, though I find grass is too bright and is pulling the eye away from the family a bit. Overall a nice clean image and I think the processing goes great with it. Nice!

Shot of Devon using a beauty dish with 30º grid, a light I don't usually

use.

It's fine, lol, when I see the name Marion I usually think it's mine! 

Hey John,

First thing, it's Mar_L_on :)

I appreciate the comments, and actually I did crop it tighter on the shoulder, but I still left a bunch of space to the left... that's just kind of my style, it's not for everyone but it's how I compose my images.

As per the skin, Lauren had great skin and I didn't do a great deal retouching her forehead or her cheeks... Though I did dodge the highlights a bit so maybe that's where you're missing some of the texture. I'm not a big fan of the plastic-skin, no-pore look either. The place I had to retouch the most was her chin, which was a bit red with some imperfections. 

Thanks for looking!

I love the tones, and the painting-like background blur, but most of all I love her expression. You've captured a wonderful moment. Great model, too. I like the grain, too.

I love this shot! In the thumbnail I thought it was a moving train, and I love how it's not just a snapshot of a car but an image that captures a perspective I don't ever see of an automobile. Love how you got low on it to isolate it from what I guess is just lines of other cars and people. Well done.

I rarely shoot on location. It's much harder than in studio! Let me know how

I did, please, this is the area in which I would like to improve the most. Be

harsh...!

Amazing image. Truly beautiful.

I love the concept, and the pose is great. The difference of brightness between her leg and her chest is a bit distracting, but overall this is an awesome image.

Great shot. There is good texture in the highlights and the tonal range is excellent.

Hey everyone... 'shopped this over the weekend for a model's portfolio,

wanted to know what you thought about it. Been trying to play around with

colors and saturation a bit.